Finchabald Posted May 14, 2005 Share Posted May 14, 2005 In the party, People around, No-one can hear me, Not a sound, Darkness Surrounds me, Whithin it comfort i find, To hide from the people And Hide From The Sound. Within my comfort, No-one will find My crimson regrets, The truth to my lies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blueangel Posted May 14, 2005 Share Posted May 14, 2005 Suddenly from darkness A distant light stirs And so emerges A loving girl She asks to dance To fight away the pain Is what she plans And bring you back again -hug- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForAnother Posted May 20, 2005 Share Posted May 20, 2005 Blueangel, that was the sweetest response I have ever seen on this website. Thank you for that. That was sweet. ForAnother Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShySoul Posted May 20, 2005 Share Posted May 20, 2005 blueangel, You are an angel. That was sweet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blueangel Posted May 20, 2005 Share Posted May 20, 2005 This is supposed to be about him, not me. (but thanks!) Seriously, though, I really liked your poem. It made me feel sad and any poem that has the ability to make you feel at all is a good one. Be proud of yourself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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