Shizzle Posted April 24, 2005 Share Posted April 24, 2005 I cant help but confess this whole thing is one big mess you have me sitting here wondering why should i carry on or just say goodbye right now i dont know how i feel! but i know what this is.. it must be real! i think of you and smile then i know its all worth while we go out and about the soft breeze in your hair mixing with the sun making you look so fair to hear the birds your eyes say a 1000 words only one line i know come and give me ago Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysterious Gurl Posted April 24, 2005 Share Posted April 24, 2005 Wow 11 outer 10 anyday! Thats was great!! I wish I had a poetic side to me. So did your write it for a girl or just one you wrote off the top of your head? Miya Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shizzle Posted April 24, 2005 Author Share Posted April 24, 2005 its for a girl that i just fallen for! she still has a bf though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rainy Posted April 24, 2005 Share Posted April 24, 2005 you have a great talent at writing poetry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysterious Gurl Posted April 24, 2005 Share Posted April 24, 2005 great talent indeed. It's a gift. I'm sorry that she has a bf. Must be hard for you. Does she know you have feelings for her? I know what it's like to fall for someone thats already taken. Take care! great poem, Miya Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shizzle Posted April 25, 2005 Author Share Posted April 25, 2005 yeah she knows! she just doesnt have the guts to finish her bf atm! bt were goin out to alton towers on sat for the day she said she needs to she how she really feels around me! so a hole day at a theme park should help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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