Sable Posted April 23, 2005 Share Posted April 23, 2005 Did you really love me? Or was every word a game The things you said And how you held me Is my love for you in vain? The summer nights in our home town The love within your eyes Were they meant for someone else? Cause to me they seem like lies. Looking back on your promises And the way you said you cared The way you stole my heart from me My every night lone prayer. I waited for the perfect kiss I thought that you would give My heart would race when you walked me home At last we were alone. I've lost my reasoning dropped everything to be with you But at the end of the day we just say goodnight And my wet pillow morning is nothing new. Will he kiss me tomorrow? Not this summer, not this time I'll have to wait somemore Maybe when you come home this year You'll give to me amore. This is about a guy from my home town and group of friends. I broke up with my boyfriend because i truly believed that something would spark between us. It never did. He lead me on all summer and is still doing so.but it never seems to come to anything. I am totally and utterly in love with him, always have been always will. I wrote this poem at the end of the summer when he went back to uni. Please let me know what you think, and any advice for getting him to be truthful would also be much appreciated. Sable xxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
metallicachica247 Posted April 23, 2005 Share Posted April 23, 2005 I like this song a lot because of its feeling, but some of the phrases seem unended when i recite them. Good job and keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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