kayjay Posted April 19, 2005 Share Posted April 19, 2005 Alright, well heres a bunch of stuff i wrote over a peroid of time. Theres some poor spelling and grammar in this but i think you can bare with it. It might be a bit of a read but it would be nice to see what some people think. Soften Fist From Bigger Fits things never seem to work out i can have the world on my side but it wouldnt even make me smile it doesnt matter how hard i try its like im not even around i could give it my all and u would of thought it was dull nothing ever made u smile so i do my best to keep myself contained from anger built over several days ive been wanting to rest for some time now just seems like i never catch a break so tomorrow i'll wake up and check the news as i usually do and go to school to learn nothing new and then come home and wait for u My Apology i'm sorry mom i know u luv me even when u didnt say im sorry dad i know ur proud of me even though u didnt say im sorry bro ur my best friend im sorry i had to go im sorry sis i wish i could take care of u but u'll be fine when im gone im sorry bugs u always made me happy plz keep everyone else that way too im sorry friends i did my best but this is where i end im sorry jen i really did try but things never went right im sorry god i know this isnt what u want but i gave my all and this is where i stop im sorry everyone this wasnt ur fault i just have problems that no one can solve i love u all Fall Into Nothing im coming home ive fallen a way out i left to soon this place is old i dont wanna live out fall into nothing i have to go to this place i know where i dont want u to follow so plz forgive me when im gone im getting cold dont wait up now Goodbye ( i'll miss you ) goodbye my friends my time has ran out its time for me to leave ive messed up enough im sorry but im gone its been so many years of taking all this abuse and i dont need one more i am sorry but this is my fate so just move on u will all be fine when im gone i'll miss u all In A Day as the morning light shines through a new day has broken leaving the past in its place and moving towards something more doing the morning routine thinking whats to come as we begin over again i can only hope for the best going to school with heavy shoulders as problems holds me back from being the person i am the person i need to be coming home to find no relief as problems mount on my weaken back "things gotta get easier" i keep telling myself knowing in my heart this is the best i get talking to a girl who shows more passion in hate as oppose to love, clearly something she doesnt seek making me feel worse than i already am knowing things will never progress laying on my bed, thinking of day's event supposing these things just happen wishing for a better day than ones past but i guess this is what i get To The One I'll Miss Theres so much that i'll miss the way u smile and the way ur eyes mimic an ocean's view the way u cared and the way u loved me i'll miss u when im gone but please take care, this isnt ur end u need to move on and be all u can life has so much to offer u ur so unique and creative ( something i always admired ) this just has to end, im just not right u need someone better, better than i ever can theres someone perfect out there just need to seek im sorry it cant be me but its for the best, u'll see maybe if u were here or i was there things could be different, but thats not how it worked and i cant just leave anymore im sorry for all ive done, but u'll be my last thought when i move on Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XSparker Posted May 9, 2005 Share Posted May 9, 2005 hey, i think that's some pretty good stuff you have there. very descriptive and very concrete. it does make me just the siightest bit sad though, is everything all good? kinda makes me worried about the poet, that's all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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