onlythelonely Posted April 19, 2005 Share Posted April 19, 2005 See my masks I wear them very well What is going on inside, no one can tell. They see a smile pasted on, a facade of what I feel I may be apathetic, I may be sad, only I know what is real. mab 4/18/05 2 a.m. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted April 19, 2005 Share Posted April 19, 2005 wow, i really liked that, it seems so different to what i usually read from here. you have an impact in such a short poem and i think you fully justify your title. i like it. you often see people who dont write a title to the work but i like it when someone can summarise or define a poems purpose. the lexis you use, i feel, is suprisingly graceful in the sense that every word seems appropriate. i like it. Kel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
onlythelonely Posted April 20, 2005 Author Share Posted April 20, 2005 Thanks for your feedback to my poem, Kel. I'm glad you liked it. onlythelonely Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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