in_the_mirror Posted April 10, 2005 Share Posted April 10, 2005 I watched her walk out the door her eyes to the sky, and she threw her arms up in the air with a smile. Her eyes were tinted with the freedom that screamed from her face. It had begun to rain. She ran to the grass and twirled around with her hands still in the air. the smile on her face never faded away, and her eyes were closed but her face still glowed. i wanted to know what it was like to have a soul like hers. It had begun to rain. She danced around and then fell back on the grass and let the rain drip down her face. I stood where it was dry, to afraid to join, how could i do that my soul wasn't that free. She then opened her eyes and looked at me. It was still raining before i knew it my shoes were off and i was running with my arms up and i could feel the warm smile spreading accross my face. and soon i also was laying in the grass, rain dripping down my face. i felt my soul, i felt it it was free, free from you the girl in the rain, she was me, but it took me awile to realize, that was my life. And for the rainy days i wait to dance, and i think of you and i don't cry anymore i released my soul, all on my own, without your help i just had to open my heart and not be afraid, and just go dance in the rain. ok so i know it isn't great but i just feel kinda trapped right now, and im wishing for it to rain so that perhaps i can stop crying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
annie24 Posted April 10, 2005 Share Posted April 10, 2005 I think this is very lovely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShySoul Posted April 11, 2005 Share Posted April 11, 2005 Very nice. I like it. We should all stop being afraid and go dance in the rain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caesium Posted April 18, 2005 Share Posted April 18, 2005 It's good, I liked it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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