The Artist Posted April 9, 2005 Share Posted April 9, 2005 Where have you gone? I never see you What's going on? What are you up to? you never talk you never write you don't answer the phone you're compleatly ou of sight you say you need me but you're never there you ask for me to come but you wont say where I try to go to you but you always hide you shut the door on me when i try come inside what's gotten into you what have you done to get yourself in this mess that's going on you gotta pull yourself together to set things stright got to try get through all this before it's all too late the house is empty cold and bare this place is lifeless when you're not there where are you going now are you coming home? well I see your face again or will you die alone? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted April 9, 2005 Share Posted April 9, 2005 Wow, i like it, i like it a lot. it seems powerful, to all youir questions you seem to come to blunt yet positive conclusions. its like you have so much to say and just waited for the oppoutinities to scream them out. i like the idea of your poem. its seems to work on several levels, it could be obvious yet i think there can be a string of metaphors within it. your very creative, i dont think you try to make it too hard to distinguish a meaning yet you leave it for portrayal. i enjoyed reading it. thanks. top notch in my eyes. maybe theres background to it? Kel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Artist Posted April 20, 2005 Author Share Posted April 20, 2005 I wonder if I should have ever shown her what I had written about her... oh well too late now really Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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