Ozone Posted April 6, 2005 Share Posted April 6, 2005 I don't really think this is that great but thought I would post it anyway. My first thought of the day is always of you Seeing you walk by can get me through All the time I spend alone I'd reach out to you but im so afraid You won't love me how I love you So I'll lie to myself and never find out If you see things the way I do You will never know what you mean to me You will never know how I feel We will never share that moment I only wish could be real To hold you close would just be too much My heart would melt with only a touch Will you push me away? And I can't help but wonder what you think And do I ever cross your mind Just take my hand and walk away with me Baby while theres still time I feel so Invisible Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kskm Posted April 7, 2005 Share Posted April 7, 2005 Very good, keep writing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ozone Posted April 18, 2005 Author Share Posted April 18, 2005 Just a bump. I would like to get some more comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caesium Posted April 18, 2005 Share Posted April 18, 2005 I like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil_8 Posted April 18, 2005 Share Posted April 18, 2005 yeah, good, i dont see anything wrong with it. As long as you write with your soul and true feelings, it will always work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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