Drawing_Queen Posted April 3, 2005 Share Posted April 3, 2005 hi it's cc i wrote a poem for a competition but didn't enter I want to know if my poem is good? So can you please tell me? Sweet taste of chocolate melting in your mouth, going down your throat it's like a little taste of heaven washing over you, you sit there just thinking what is this tatse? the teaste of your toublems melting away the taste of the coco, the fat and the sugar mixing together to make this sweet heavenly taste you sit there remembering enjoying in peace and harmony remembering your first taste of the chocolate thanks for reading cc \ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tiffany82 Posted April 3, 2005 Share Posted April 3, 2005 Yeah it's a very good poem. well done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drawing_Queen Posted April 3, 2005 Author Share Posted April 3, 2005 hi tiffany82 thanks!!! cc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whatfor Posted April 3, 2005 Share Posted April 3, 2005 haha i also love chocolate and dont know why and what it is about keep writing about chocolate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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