in_the_mirror Posted April 1, 2005 Share Posted April 1, 2005 I'm dying here writing these works again, to catch my thoughts. Perhaps its a net, but i see a web a beautiful trap. I've been caught off guard by it's beauty, with the dew drops shining in the sun. I walked head first into this perfect trap, and began to struggle, but it only got worse, and now i'm stuck, tangled and broken. Now you see me here, surprised I lasted this long. So now your fangs begin to show, when I thought you were to be my savior, but you had laid the trap and pushed me in spun me about, and tied me in. It's hard to breathe now the grip has tightened and you've gone away to teach me a lesson. So here I am dying here alone writing these words, so i can be set free, i've learned my lesson. Have you ever had one of those days where it seems everyone is conspiring against you. i actually wrote this awhile ago, im actually free from the "web" and im not confused anymore, im quite happy, considering my spring break is almost over. anyways tell me what you think of the poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaiva Posted April 2, 2005 Share Posted April 2, 2005 That's kinda how I feel know and that poem perfectly describes it. Its a lovely poem. Continue to express yourself with words. Jaiva Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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