Llanfear Posted March 30, 2005 Share Posted March 30, 2005 Hello, a few days ago I wrote this, and perhaps somebody can tell me something about it. I just never seem to be able to give my feelings a shape, and well, I just hope somebody can perhaps understand what I was trying to say. If not, I have failed once more. I'm not a poet, and English is not my mother tongue, so if you have any remarks about the language, please, you're welcome. i'm a foreigner in your land forsaken and afraid 'cause you're not willing to explain a single roadsign to me crucified by every single word every gesture you didn't think about when i lie in your arms i lie at your feet hopefully beaten lovingly horrified un-cared for i am no human being have no rights no opinion nor feelings that matter silently i cry out the dirges for my courage for my strength won't you see me struggling? you carry on crushing my cries under your senseless feet 'till a veil of frightened silence covers them all i love you and i don't know what it is know who you are who i am oh dear life i'm so afraid Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kskm Posted April 5, 2005 Share Posted April 5, 2005 Very interesting. It is good to get your feelings and emotions out. keep wirting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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