From_Now_On Posted March 28, 2005 Share Posted March 28, 2005 Think About It Don't you look down on someone Unless you are helping them up It may look like they're all right While they're really giving up And you don't know Cuz you can't know What's going on inside their head And don't you think But you don't think You just assume instead (yeah) Don't you look down (on someone unless they're) On the ground (And you're) Are you helping them up? By pushing them down Think about it -Chorus- You don't know Cuz you can't know What's going on inside their head And don't you think But you don't think You just assume instead -End Chorus- That they are just fine That your problems are worse Just because they don't look like they are about to burst Are they about to burst? -chorus- That they are alright That they're not all too bright Has anyone ever got you completely wrong? And maybe you just have got this completely wrong -chorus- (yeah) Don't you look down (on someone unless they're) On the ground (And you're) Are you helping them up? By pushing them down Think about it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FeelinLuckyPUNK Posted March 29, 2005 Share Posted March 29, 2005 hey im a songwriter too...WOOHOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! a song i wrote last year...one of my first Brighter Tomorrow when the world aint on your side dont run away and hide, youve got to look out for yourself when your life goes crashing down dont try to drink you know youll drown, dont you give up the fight cos its not right when tomorrow is a new day gotta stay up, gotta stay high cos the suns still in the sky dont ever give up, dont let yourself down cos soon your world will turn itself around will turn itself around.... whenever your feeling blue remember these things are said to try you, you can make it if you take it a day by day cos theres always another way gotta stay up, gotta stay high cos the suns still in the sky dont ever give up, dont let yourself down cos soon your world will turn itself around gotta stay up, gotta stay high cos the suns still in the sky dont ever give up, dont let yourself down cos soon your world will turn itself around turn itself around... LOL one of my first song i ever wrote and one of the first in the bin!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
From_Now_On Posted March 29, 2005 Author Share Posted March 29, 2005 I liked it. One of the first you wrote even? Good job. I wish I could locate the first lyrics I ever wrote...but I've been writing longer than...shoot, longer than pen and paper were even around (haha, kidding)...feels like it though, lol. Keep writing. =) -FNO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FeelinLuckyPUNK Posted April 2, 2005 Share Posted April 2, 2005 yeah you too!!!! I wrote Brighter Tomorrow about 2 years ago lol What you think of this chrous for an old song...i was thinking of beefing it up a bit!! 'Maniac' Cos shes a maniac Ive tried to tell her she wont listen A maniac She does things for no reason Cos shes got something wrong Shes got something wrong with her mind... aww the memories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
From_Now_On Posted April 2, 2005 Author Share Posted April 2, 2005 yeah you too!!!! I wrote Brighter Tomorrow about 2 years ago lol What you think of this chrous for an old song...i was thinking of beefing it up a bit!! 'Maniac' Cos shes a maniac Ive tried to tell her she wont listen A maniac She does things for no reason Cos shes got something wrong Shes got something wrong with her mind... aww the memories It's a good start. I think it could be cleaned up a bit but I love the concept. It's definitely got potential. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForAnother Posted April 2, 2005 Share Posted April 2, 2005 Nice job From Now On ForAnother Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GettingOverIt Posted April 19, 2005 Share Posted April 19, 2005 Man, this has Avril Lavigne written all over it! ;-) I could see her singing this one! Nice work, FNO! ;-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
From_Now_On Posted April 19, 2005 Author Share Posted April 19, 2005 Thanks for the comments. and...~laughs~, thanks gettingoverit. Maybe I'll send it to her ;-) ...haha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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