black_magic Posted March 24, 2005 Share Posted March 24, 2005 you run your poison through my veins encouraging me to feel this pain an ounce of pleasure is seen in your eyes this satisfaction has no disguise you lick your lips with temptation i can see this destruction comes with no hesitation i turn my face, you stand aside a small attempt to run or hide you push me back and pull me near my body errupts with years of tears this body trembles a bismal life of corruption it does resemble kel x sorry this is in general advice, i should have put it in poetry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
angel200488 Posted March 27, 2005 Share Posted March 27, 2005 wow that it really good! Keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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