Giarc Posted March 22, 2005 Share Posted March 22, 2005 Hey everyone. I had to write a poem for school using quotes depicting good and evil, so I chose evil becuase my quotes for good weren't very good. Anyway, it is a Found poem, which uses bits and pieces of quotes to create a poem, so I justed wanted to know what you all thought of it. The poem is supposed to signify how evil tempts everyone, and it is all around them and if they are consumed by the evil they can't escape. Just thought I should throw that in. Wickedness, secrets, rotten beings Acknowlegde the secret Mistaken happiness Evil Mere goodness achieves little Those who don't know, don't suspect Man chooses evil Corruption Acknowledge the evil around you Lack of goodness Evil Find it, become corrupt Try the evil Well there it is... tell me what you think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
in_the_mirror Posted March 24, 2005 Share Posted March 24, 2005 i like it, we all have our evil sides and some are actually quite funny to watch, but that is a totally different subject. anyways great job, keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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