Will yall rate my poem?!?

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HELP

Her life is a nightmare that no one can awake.

Her feelings she hides make it harder to escape.

She gets deeper and deeper.

And hopes to rest in peace.

Waiting everyday for death to come take her away.

Loving him wasen't enough.

Fixing everything was surpose to make it okay.

But nothing could make her pain go away.

She asked everyday:

Why did everyone see though her and

Why coulden't anyone be with her for her?!?

But no one could reply.

No one was ever there.

Every night she would cry for help.

She'd open her mouth,

But nothing would come out.

How long did she have to wait?!?

How long till her day would come?!?

But one night her nightmare was gone.

Death had answered her prayers.

Now she has woken from her dream.