scootermojo Posted March 19, 2005 Share Posted March 19, 2005 IT FEELS LIKE... i took a warm bronzed strand of your hair and stretched it sideways...inside i cried swept into the seems of me my head's not working from your spell i sort of strayed from what i should know i'll try and be like you with life tonight and yearn for love i don't deserve from you...but it feels so right teach me the fun that only you could know the sun is coming up and i swear to god tonight the fountain feels like snow i'm glad i got your hands warm so my arms can trust again i can promise true days when the sun comes the worst of this, the same, embracing, back to where it all began, maybe catch a new wave, it feels like... so then i stare as the time drags on and i think of the fire and the traces behind your eyes i sleep like god, insider her womb you see clearly, too, the silliness laughing inside my mind glad to hold your hand tonight so i can feel the trust begin you promise good days when the message comes the best of this, the intent, it's unclear to me brave man, i'll be back again and maybe ride your wave for it feels like... throw out the old, inject the charge we care for all of ours you're my prose now, transend your powers just like my heart's desires the promise to come in and see it feels like... ...love. IN BLOOM i'm picturing your wide open eyes smiling as i feed the nerves push the feeling and colorful sighs but only if you can see, like only you can do i'm picturing you under the lights if you can see if we can reach an answer to a delicate rest but i just sit and wait, for a wink and you to open your life streams shoot high that let's me see another side raining down softly until an inner beauty shines and your back skims through the steam picking up two roses and sprinkling away a dusty sleep that comes too soon and me, i'm wondering if we're in bloom i'm thinking of your soothing green eyes smiling as you greet the day...THEY CAN SEE ME!!! and now i'm picturing us drinking wine drinking all days away, in bliss, together and twirling outside but i just sit and wait for the rythm of a perfect little girl... it's all so true, all so soon my heart speaks, "i'd like to see us together, i'd like to rest my head on you. I need to feel my soft one and to make the earth stop. i've been searching for angels and failing every day. i love you now as i've never loved before. please remember my face as we lay in the rain." i dream of a jet ride, seeing you from the outside flying slowly as you clench my arm looking ahead through the rain drops feeling your upturned lips and sprinkling away a fantastic journey that ended so soon watching you full in bloom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
greenowl88 Posted March 19, 2005 Share Posted March 19, 2005 WOW!!! I am completely impressed!!! I'm quite speechless..... What a poet you are!! Amazing!! I'm not sure I've ever been quite so touched by words before. Just beautiful. Thank you for sharing that with me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
greenowl88 Posted March 19, 2005 Share Posted March 19, 2005 How old are you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scootermojo Posted March 19, 2005 Author Share Posted March 19, 2005 thanks for the compliment....it's amazing what coming out of a relationship can do to you! lol i'm torn between being jaded and remembering all of the good times. those poems focused on the good memories. actually, i'm not really inclined to ever write anything negative about it so....lol btw, i'm the big 3-0! thanks again for the compliment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
greenowl88 Posted March 19, 2005 Share Posted March 19, 2005 You're very welcome!! I've written a lot of poetry myself. It's weird, I wrote my best stuff when I was in turmoil and so-called despair. My stuff isn't pessimistic or anything (well, some of it is). Most of it has uplifting endings and are hopeful, even if they start out dark. I wanted to tell you that your poems are impressing, and I am not easily impressed. Although I enjoy writing myself, I don't generally like to read poems, and even when I do, I don't like many of them. Thanks again for sharing!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scootermojo Posted March 19, 2005 Author Share Posted March 19, 2005 i've always considered it ironic that when i'm in the duldrums of life that i always have the inspiration to write stuff. good thing i usually find myself in that sort of mood, i guess, since i always seem to be writing and writing and writing. funny, when i look back upon times such as what i wrote about above and i never have the inspiration to write anything for i'm just caught in the moment and not thinking about putting things into words. oh, well... i've always loved to read poetry...especially romantic poems...for as long as i can remember and since you said that you generally don't like what you read it makes your kind words all the more better. thanks again. also...the sharing thing...forgive me if i seem a tad arrogant but it's more along the lines of self-preservation during these times of trying to make sense of the whole situation i was in...lol just joking, however, it is cathartic just get out what's inside. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
greenowl88 Posted March 19, 2005 Share Posted March 19, 2005 I know what you mean about self-preservation. I find writing to be quite theraputic. Writing always helped me get through rough times, and helped me understand myself better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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