soon2bfamous Posted March 19, 2005 Share Posted March 19, 2005 alone at last he puts me down steps on me walks away and laughs at me i lie there, helpless and bruised until you come and help me through you help me up brush me off tell me that you care alot we get to know, eachothers lies my beauty, suddenly and abrubtly dies i have not lied to you you see i thought you would understand me i cannot blame you for leaving me i only wish i could join you im still stuck stuck with me the me who makes so many angry every lie im told, or lie i tell is another tally of painstaking hell my arm it shows the count to date im now alone, if you care to know thats better to me as you can see for now i cannot harm those i love around me not very good, but worth posting i guess xoxox youll never know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
in_the_mirror Posted March 19, 2005 Share Posted March 19, 2005 i like it it is very good. i just hope you know that no one is really ever alone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
From_Now_On Posted March 21, 2005 Share Posted March 21, 2005 I like this poem...nice job...and yes, like previously stated, you are not alone. Hang in there, -FNO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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