Hazel_Eyes Posted March 10, 2005 Share Posted March 10, 2005 brake me Cut out my tongue So i can't speak Stab out my eyes So i can't peak Take out my heart So it won't leak Cut off my fingers So i can keep The one's i love From hurt so deep Burst my ears So i can't hear Take my mind So you can't come near Chop off my legs So i can't stalk Take you away It's all my fault! © Colette Gibbings Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
greenowl88 Posted March 11, 2005 Share Posted March 11, 2005 Intense!! Interesting though. Hope you don't really feel that way sweetie!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hazel_Eyes Posted March 11, 2005 Author Share Posted March 11, 2005 i do.. altho yes it would hurt, i do deserve it.. or in my eyes i do Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
greenowl88 Posted March 12, 2005 Share Posted March 12, 2005 No one deserves that!! Don't be so hard on yourself!! I'm sure you're a great person!! Cheer up!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost2626 Posted March 12, 2005 Share Posted March 12, 2005 you are an amazing poet and that is a great poem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hazel_Eyes Posted March 12, 2005 Author Share Posted March 12, 2005 link removed heres my other poems. may i recommend fingers of time and cacti Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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