Motley_Crue Posted March 8, 2005 Share Posted March 8, 2005 The whole world dances But I am hiding inside my fences Sad because I dont know where you are I am spending my time in dreamland I reach out for your hand We are together again The dawn fell upon us Oh joy, oh bliss then oh bust I wake up alone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dude123 Posted March 8, 2005 Share Posted March 8, 2005 The whole world dances But I am hiding inside my fences Sad because I dont know where you are I am spending my time in dreamland I reach out for your hand We are together again The dawn fell upon us Oh joy, oh bliss then oh bust I wake up alone I like your poem. Keep up the writing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nothingontheinside Posted March 8, 2005 Share Posted March 8, 2005 nice i like it shows a lot even in the shortness keep up your writing! xsigned with a smilex -ness Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
clodhopper Posted March 9, 2005 Share Posted March 9, 2005 i really like your poem. it's actually kinda what i've been thinking about today a bit. sad cuz i don't know what my ex is thinking or doing... and i go into dreamland and we're together and it's just fixed... and i wake up and i'm alone keep up the good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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