daredevil Posted March 1, 2005 Share Posted March 1, 2005 She sits there... feeling the rooms atmosphere... The candles and the lovely light.. this girl is just searching for someone to hold tonight... A person which can make her feel, that this love is soo real!... This guy or man.... Could he be more than a person just coming from dreamland?... He needs to be.... a real person not just a thing... Which can make the bells of/in her heart ring Do you like it or? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted March 1, 2005 Share Posted March 1, 2005 Very nice poem I liked it keep writing it's very sweet! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daredevil Posted March 1, 2005 Author Share Posted March 1, 2005 Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CarterJonas Posted March 1, 2005 Share Posted March 1, 2005 Yip very good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daredevil Posted March 1, 2005 Author Share Posted March 1, 2005 Wooo Have 2 more but can't post them in a new thread Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CarterJonas Posted March 1, 2005 Share Posted March 1, 2005 No I think that if you have a post up on the opening page then you cannot post another until it has gone off the page....if that makes sense?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daredevil Posted March 1, 2005 Author Share Posted March 1, 2005 It does hehe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tanned_production Posted March 1, 2005 Share Posted March 1, 2005 Great poem Keep writing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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