From_Now_On Posted February 28, 2005 Share Posted February 28, 2005 Add Tears Unto My Bucket I'm crying again Not on the outside But I need some time alone To just run and hide No one knows the pain I've seen They'd never guess the troubles Though I know that it could be worse By more than just the doubles But here they cry to me Of lost 'love' and oh their pain Do they know my demons, That slowly drive me insane? I'm not asking to cry to the world I'm not saying their troubles are less I'm saying that I'm dying Beneath all of this stress I cry to myself inside I can't carry all this weight This love, this pain, this hate So what is it that haunts me? What tickles terror in my soul so deep? I cannot begin to word it As it chases me to sleep Nightmares, daymares Whispering voices Making wrong choices But I hurt for them So deep as though it were MY sorrows And they think, 'she cannot comprehend Just quite how I feel' But oh I do know hurt Unbearably unreal So add tears unto my bucket Of unshed misery I will be there for you Though you'll never care much for me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmptySoul Posted February 28, 2005 Share Posted February 28, 2005 Good job. I like the last stanza best. Empty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
June4life Posted February 28, 2005 Share Posted February 28, 2005 I agree, the last stanza is definitely the best one!! You're an excellent poet! "So add tears unto my bucket" I love that! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
digital fiction Posted March 1, 2005 Share Posted March 1, 2005 Sis you did another great poem! It says alot! Its real deep plus its awesome! =) Well done!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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