bilal72401 Posted February 21, 2005 Share Posted February 21, 2005 Is it becuz i came here? or is it becuz i was dragged? do u ever see your self being pulled out of u? and not knowing where u will be taken? do u ever feel like u are being ripped apart? just becuz u were dragged? did u ever feel u were ok in the place u were? until u were ripped out and dragged? do u ever remember ur childhood? it is soo far apart? becuz u were dragged u are not there no more do u ever feel like u wanna go back but u cant? do u feel like u were little and didnt know? that u were being dragged? do u feel like u were innocent? and didnt know what to say? do u feel like u were little? and didnt know what decisions to make? do u feel like u were not old enough? to know where u was gonna be taken? Do u ever feel like your beleifs are changing? Becuz u came to this new place is it becuz u were dragged? or is it becuz u just came? do u ever feel like u will die soon? but it wont come? do u ever feel scared of dying? not knowing whats gonna be ahead? do u ever feel like jumping in the water? and not rising back up ever again? but again do u feel scared of dying? not knowing whats ahead? do u ever feel like u are stuck here in this world? with your sins which wont be accepted in the world ahead? do u ever feel like no one is with u and no one will care? do ever feel like the one with tears in your eyes walking while no one looks or cares? do feel like u are worthless? becuz of what u have done? is it just me or do u feel the same thing? will it ever get better? will i ever change? or am i stuck here with no to talk to? or no one to look up to? i dont know my answers becuz i am lost in this world. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stolenshadow Posted February 21, 2005 Share Posted February 21, 2005 It's not horrible, just very sad and deep. I like all the questions, it's nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bilal72401 Posted February 21, 2005 Author Share Posted February 21, 2005 that poem is basically my whole life right there on a page Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
From_Now_On Posted February 22, 2005 Share Posted February 22, 2005 "do u feel like u were little and didnt know?" That was my favourite line in the poem. It was a nice poem...thought-provoking. I liked the questions. Your life in one page you said? I can relate to a lot of it. It seems like many of those questions run through my mind often as well. Good job. -FNO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bilal72401 Posted February 22, 2005 Author Share Posted February 22, 2005 that is one of the lines that mean alot to me, because that has to do with a huge major transition i had to go through when i was 13 i am now almost 21 but i can still feel the pain i had to go through because of the transition, and it is still affecting me today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
From_Now_On Posted February 25, 2005 Share Posted February 25, 2005 that is one of the lines that mean alot to me, because that has to do with a huge major transition i had to go through when i was 13 i am now almost 21 but i can still feel the pain i had to go through because of the transition, and it is still affecting me today. I know what you are saying...it's crazy how even things from our childhood can effect us still. It was a good line...and the feeling behind it gives it that much more. I'm sorry to hear it though. Sometimes life's...crazy. Take Care, -FNO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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