heartbroken_f Posted February 21, 2005 Share Posted February 21, 2005 I wish that you were still mine wish that this time hasnt passed but i look to the future and fear it will come all too fast I still miss your love i still miss the way you made me smile nothing i seem to do from here on out seems to be worthwhile No one else compares to you even though you hurt me in an unimaginable way i cant let go of you how can i look to a brand new day? please let me trust you make it up to me in some way because i want to love you forever each and every day Link to comment
heartbroken_f Posted April 8, 2005 Author Share Posted April 8, 2005 and yes, the poem is sad. However, it reflects a sad part of my life... Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted April 9, 2005 Share Posted April 9, 2005 i like your poem. i think its speaks for itself and has a lot of depth, you seem to show that even though there is all this hope you still seem to have hope when it comes to love. its like, youve been hurt but you still feel as strong. i think its powerful but i hope you dont feel exactly as you writ. sometimes comparisons are the worst things. they dont give chance for originality. i remember one time in a relationship i copied the routes of a past relationship because it was lively and healthy....yet if you think about it, despite that, it didnt last so dont copy old routes all the time. i hope you are having better days .. smiles. kel. Link to comment
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