From_Now_On Posted February 20, 2005 Share Posted February 20, 2005 Title Me Tomorrow --------------------- Title me tomorrow Today I'm not the same Yesterday I was different I have this tendency to change Title me tomorrow Because tomorrow never comes So much adding and subtracting Can the answers still be sums? Title me tomorrow Pick one from the vast range Reduce me to a label So I'm just another name Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted February 21, 2005 Share Posted February 21, 2005 Can you explain exactly what this poem meant to you?I really liked it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
From_Now_On Posted February 22, 2005 Author Share Posted February 22, 2005 The line was to raise the question of when you take away and add to something to 'improve' it...can the result still be an 'improvement'? It was a math analogy because a sum is what you call an answer to an addition problem, not a subtraction problem...but if you do both, can it still be considered a sum? For subtraction problem answers are not called sums...they are referred to as 'differences'. I'm sorry, I don't know how clearly I am explaining all of this. Anyway, that's why I used the line that I choose to use. However, I was glad to hear you saw it fit to write down. Perhaps I'll think of an alternate line to put in it just for you. If I do I'll be sure to let you know. I must confess I wrote this poem in a time spanning less than 5 minutes. So I'm sure a little more time could perhaps lend a more appealing line. Thank you for your comment. -FNO- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
From_Now_On Posted February 22, 2005 Author Share Posted February 22, 2005 Can you explain exactly what this poem meant to you?I really liked it Ang: I really admired your question. I appreciate your interest in knowing what this poem meant to me. Actually, I had been working on another poem...and I could not find a title for it. I came up with the idea to call the poem "Title Me Tomorrow". But then I realized that I really liked the concept portrayed in that statement. Name's have this tendencey to take so much significance from things...especially people. We get labled or thrown into stereotypes or what have you. So...this is kind of just what came to me as i thought about all of that. Anyway, thank you for your comment. And I'm glad to hear you liked it...were you able to relate in any specific way? I'd be interested in hearing what it meant to you, if anything. Thanks again, -FNO- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bilal72401 Posted February 22, 2005 Share Posted February 22, 2005 i like ur poem, its unique i not seem one math related one before, my major is Math so i think that poem is kinda neat Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bilal72401 Posted February 22, 2005 Share Posted February 22, 2005 not just neat, i liked it alot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
From_Now_On Posted February 22, 2005 Author Share Posted February 22, 2005 bilal72401: Wow, math major yeah? I have a lot of respect for that. Math is never something that has come easily for me. I've always been more into English and whatnot. I guess that's why I enjoy the few easy math concepts like that. The concepts I can grasp I find pretty facinating. Of course, the one I used in this poem is so basic it can hardly even be considered as really a 'math concept'. Anyway, thanks for you comment and I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. I also appreciate you taking the time to post the second comment. Thanks again, -FNO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bilal72401 Posted February 22, 2005 Share Posted February 22, 2005 even if it is something simple like so it can still be considered something, i would value it a little more than something small, because it is unique and not every one can do what u can do, so i respect that and value it high even if u think it is something simple! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bilal72401 Posted February 22, 2005 Share Posted February 22, 2005 i wrote a poem today, u can read it if u want heres the link: link removed its called "horrible poem" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bilal72401 Posted February 22, 2005 Share Posted February 22, 2005 thanks for reading and writing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
From_Now_On Posted February 22, 2005 Author Share Posted February 22, 2005 Well I suppose that makes me all the more flattered. . Thanks again...still need me to work on that line for ya though? lol. Take Care. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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