beginners poetry, comments welcomed

[Wasted_generation]

IS THIS LOVE?

we connected via internet,

we talked for hours on end.

we told how much we like one another,

it seemed there was no end

Is this love?

I hope so.

then we finally met,

it was good as it could get

a beautiful night

it seemed so right

is this love?

i hope so.

now it seems she's gone,

and i just cant go on

thoughts of her go on and on

is this love?

i hope so.

i love her,

but will she ever love me?

is this the way it'll always be?

is this love?

i hope so.

we have the freedom of choice,

and if God has a plan for every man

why wont God let us choose the plan?

i love her, maybe she doesnt love me,

because it seems she's always to busy

maybe its the way it will always be..

is this love? for me,

it always will be.

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I HOPE SO.

if i love her,

will she love me?

i hope so.

i accapted her for what she is

has she really accepted me?

i hope so.

since i trust her,

does she trust me?

i hope so.

is there anything i can do

to get her to see the real me?

i hope so.

will she ever love me a

fraction of how much i love her?

it doesnt matter,

i will never give up on her,

but i DO hope so.

[11flower]

I like your poem.

 

 

 

11flower

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yeah, good poem

 

sounds like you have made this poem out of something has happened

[Wasted_generation]

yeah, it is made from recent events... and i just cant let her go.. its too hard. so that would explain the poems, lol. thanks, i am so glad you guys like it though!

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heh, i know what you feel like, exactly the same thing is happening to me at the moment!!!

 

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