SilverPoet Posted June 2, 2003 Share Posted June 2, 2003 Just let me say what comes to my mind, and if it occurs to you that I'm 2 sublime, through and through this rhyme, if you want me to explain all in all that's fine... Cuz i'm about 2 lose more than just this mind... I'ma go about this, these words define, I'm only wastin' on you my life and time... you drive me crazy; am I insane? I'm undoubtedly always 2 blame... our hearts compare seemingly the same... If I could put our past behind and the future in a frame... I would end up with an blank page, emotionally caged, am I afraid to say what i need 2 say in order to make a change..? go through all my pain, sort out my feelings arranged... but for now...they remain same. Copyrighted by Darrian Blades (Immunity) [/code] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SwingFox Posted June 6, 2003 Share Posted June 6, 2003 Hi Darrian, It's a sad poem. I understand from this that you're in confusion at the moment. I hope for you a brighter and clear future soon. I hope you will find your way around and wish you good luck in what you do! Well done job on the poem! ~ SwingFox ~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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