loviv-life-forever Posted February 8, 2005 Share Posted February 8, 2005 I hate you I hate the fact that u did that I hate the thought of ever going back I hate trying to forget the pain Why did u do that to me? Why did u make me suffer? Why did u bring me down with u? I hate u U hater the life u made me have Now the life u made me have is over Now the pain I try to forget is gone The demons of my soul are released The suffering u put me through is gone It is all done I took that knife in my hand It was all done u found me dead Now u see what u made me do After all the suffering After all the pain After all the memories After all the nights of crying myself to sleep After all the things you put me through It's all done with the cut of the knife Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IlOvEyOu Posted February 11, 2005 Share Posted February 11, 2005 o man that is really good and i kno how you feel i feel the same exact way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
loviv-life-forever Posted February 12, 2005 Author Share Posted February 12, 2005 ya this is one of my worse poems i have alot more that i think are better...People where i live do alot things like writing poems and crap cuase there is nothing else to do and most of us if not all of us are depressed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yeawutever Posted June 26, 2006 Share Posted June 26, 2006 LOL, don't say that loviv-life-forever, it's a very creative poem!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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