mymelancholysoul Posted February 1, 2005 Share Posted February 1, 2005 Flicker On Off On Off Flicker Feels like Im fading Constantly fading Falling Hush Hush Listen Hear that? No, You wouldn't Pop One Two Ten Twenty Small white candies Dancing on my tongue Down Down Down they go! Will she stop? Nobody knows!!! Go on Laugh Laugh it away Feels good, Doesn't it? When they swirl around your mind Click They hit the floor All over What a mess What a mess Drip Drop Drip Drop Tink tink tink Into the sink Little crimson pearls Beautiful Almost enough Almost enough String them up Make a necklace Where it around your neck Thump Thump Slump on the floor Can't see anymore Flicker On Off On Off Flicker Off Blown out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForAnother Posted February 1, 2005 Share Posted February 1, 2005 wow, took me on an adventure... I got so intrigued in the middle.. the pace was perfect... I feel like the necklace part hurts it... but I took it as popping pills to suicide... but I love the paranoid idea of it... got me paranoid and kinda scared reading it. Love it till the middle... and I love the repetition of the beginning at the end.... Beautiful ForAnother Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
From_Now_On Posted February 1, 2005 Share Posted February 1, 2005 Awesome piece. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delaurence23 Posted February 3, 2005 Share Posted February 3, 2005 it was amazing, it put so many vivid images in my head it was unbelievable you got a real talent Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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