Emotional Posted January 31, 2005 Share Posted January 31, 2005 Life's a mess danzel in distress lost in a desert, yet living in a house puts on some effort ,yet havnt got a spouse lips soft as a pedal, deep brown eyes not to easy yet not to settle, is what u should reconize face is refreshing body is nice and lean almost everyday uses listerine takes care of herself , a real nice chick takes care of her health, doesnt want to get sick sees life as a blur its unclear to her whys there so much wonder and the only thing is why? why do much happeneds? why ppl lie? why not laugh instead of letting out a cry? Why lifes so hard when the sayings easy as pie? why theres so much trouble and why politics get worse why im in a bubble and why explanations is what i thirst Wipes her tears off her face and smiles away lifes full of fears but tomorrow's a new day... You gave me hope...A little part of me now belongs to you You kept me going.. You were my bestfriend My worse nightmare my smiles my frowns my ups my downs My rights my wrongs my good my bad My everything.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForAnother Posted January 31, 2005 Share Posted January 31, 2005 I like your first one quite a bit. Your second one is generic, yet it is all our thoughts. Great you are accepting it m'lady, keep writing... your uniqueness will pour out the more and more you understand poetry. Well done, ForAnother Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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