EmptySoul Posted January 29, 2005 Share Posted January 29, 2005 you get done with another guy and it's hard to breath again you're suicidal you want to die but you're laughing at his jokes saying yes, i had fun too you don't remember why it started and you don't know why you can't say no all you know is that you're tired you see that you are tired your toes are on the ledge you love the darkness of the sky the stars that shine so bright like pinpricks in the blanket of night but it's not enough to keep you here you know this, you do and you whisper to god that you love everything he did for you if he's there maybe you hope he's there you're falling the sky you always loved is flying by and you wish you could've jumped up to see if there's a heaven but down is the only way to go and i guess it suits you and you know the taste of blood and concrete bitten tongue and broken teeth broken bones that you can feel, so much worse than those scars of yours you can't hear anything except the rush of the pain but even now it's fading in the background you can hear the people they're screaming they're crying and some of them just stare they know that they are at fault they ridiculed when you needed them most you can see your eyes there's nothing left to view except the live ones staring at the dead one- you. Empty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
babybabylove Posted January 29, 2005 Share Posted January 29, 2005 why are you so depressed? you're only 15, you should be embraceing life Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
From_Now_On Posted February 1, 2005 Share Posted February 1, 2005 Another dark, yet incredibly beautiful poem. You have undeniable talent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delaurence23 Posted February 2, 2005 Share Posted February 2, 2005 response to the first post since when do you have the right to critizcize someone for being depressed and since when did age matter i think you need to open up your eyes and see that she may be having trouble wit a lotta things sounds likes your totally oblivious... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delaurence23 Posted February 2, 2005 Share Posted February 2, 2005 response to the first post since when do you have the right to critizcize someone for being depressed and since when did age matter i think you need to open up your eyes and see that she may be having trouble wit a lotta things sounds likes your totally oblivious... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
loviv-life-forever Posted February 8, 2005 Share Posted February 8, 2005 Ya age doesn't matter cause i write poems like this all the time and i'm only 13!!! i jsut did a big prject on depression and self-harm and i think maybe u should look into cause it isn't what most ppl think it is... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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