reminiscent suicide.

[EmptySoul]

you get done with another guy

and it's hard to breath again

you're suicidal

you want to die

but you're laughing at his jokes

saying yes, i had fun too

you don't remember why it started

and you don't know why you can't say no

all you know is that you're tired

you see that you are tired

your toes are on the ledge

you love the darkness of the sky

the stars that shine so bright

like pinpricks in the blanket

of night

but it's not enough to keep you here

you know this, you do

and you whisper

to god that you love everything he did for you

if he's there

maybe you hope he's there

you're falling

the sky you always loved is flying by

and you wish you could've jumped up

to see if there's a heaven

but down is the only way to go

and i guess it suits you

and you know

the taste of blood and concrete

bitten tongue

and broken teeth

broken bones that you can feel, so much worse than those scars

of yours

you can't hear anything

except the rush of the pain

but even now it's fading

in the background you can hear the people

they're screaming

they're crying

and some of them just stare

they know that they are at fault

they ridiculed when you needed them most

you can see your eyes

there's nothing left to view

except the live ones staring at the dead one-

you.

 

Empty

[babybabylove]

why are you so depressed? you're only 15, you should be embraceing life

[From_Now_On]

Another dark, yet incredibly beautiful poem. You have undeniable talent.

[Delaurence23]

response to the first post

since when do you have the right to critizcize someone for being depressed

and since when did age matter

i think you need to open up your eyes

and see that she may be having trouble wit a lotta things

sounds likes your totally oblivious...

[Delaurence23]

response to the first post

since when do you have the right to critizcize someone for being depressed

and since when did age matter

i think you need to open up your eyes

and see that she may be having trouble wit a lotta things

sounds likes your totally oblivious...

[loviv-life-forever]

Ya age doesn't matter cause i write poems like this all the time and i'm only 13!!! i jsut did a big prject on depression and self-harm and i think maybe u should look into cause it isn't what most ppl think it is...