PammyFoo Posted January 28, 2005 Share Posted January 28, 2005 Rolling, rushing Water walls. Fall and rush Push the driftwood Sweeping away the little dots. Poor women, men, children. The unsaveable The left behind. In the dark of the walls. Leaves of the lillies snap. Dying Drowning in the pain. Is it rain? No. It does not fall from the sky but appears from the horizon. Nowehere. From the once beautiful night sight. The new land. Atlantis sleeps now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delaurence23 Posted February 3, 2005 Share Posted February 3, 2005 great poem,.... i hate when people dont respond, it makes you feel like its not good yours is really good... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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