boonpop Posted January 28, 2005 Share Posted January 28, 2005 I can't really explain my thoughts to you. You wouldn't understand my tongue Away but never gone I've spoken to your soul Your absense keeps me company Some nights you even run from me Sitting beside the silence I'm forced to hear my thoughts. Standing alone in the still of things I'm wondering what the next day brings. I can't quite get a hold on things Without pondering on our past. Afraid to take a chance at love Not knowing how long it will last. Sitting beside the silence Lacking guidance on my path Approaching with hesitations Lacking skills of calculations I've always had low expectations For situations involving math. I still feel your smile And remember the bliss of your kiss away but never gone At least now I know that Love exist. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Desired1 Posted January 29, 2005 Share Posted January 29, 2005 very...nice...and interesting keep writting i have no idea what it's about but very nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AdriSnow Posted November 14, 2006 Share Posted November 14, 2006 Nonone will understand this poem unless they have been with you long enough to understand you, long enough to love you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted November 15, 2006 Share Posted November 15, 2006 Understanding poetry can also come if you relate to it... I believe i relate to alot of poems on here. Although the writer may not have intended a reader to feel the way i do. Its how you read something, not who you know. Although AdriSnow is right. We will never understand your work the way you write it until we know you. Anyway i loved it. It showed how you felt and that is one of the best ways to create good poetry. I still feel your smile And remember the bliss of your kiss away but never gone At least now I know that Love exist. I loved that part so beautiful! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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