I just wrote this poem tell me what you think:)

[ang3l2004]

I see you standing there with a blank look on your face,

Like all the thing's we did together you just try to erase.

 

I am thinking to myself on why I am still so alone,

That when I walk around this house it is a empty home.

 

I try to justify everything that you did and said to me,

All the times we argued still nothing made you see.

 

I feel deep within my heart love for you that wont go away,

It is way down deep inside of me and that is where it will stay.

 

Do you think that it is right that we are starting to talk again,

I hope that everything will be ok and not like way back then.

 

I know that they say forgive and forget things that happen to you,

I just dont want to ever again go through what I went through.

 

But still something makes me think about you each and everyday,

Makes me feel like you never left me that you never went away.

 

So mabe this is right or mabe I will find out it's wrong,

But I always knew that my love for you was strong.

 

So if I get heart broken again or you even hurt me,

I will just know this time it was a mistake and once again fly free.

[NotJustAnybody]

I adored it. It reminds me so much of my own relationship. Keep writing.

[foolishpleasure8]

So many relationships go through this exact situation.Keep writing ..Its Great!! I love it

[GettingOverIt]

Wow.... This is exactly how I felt after this summer... Man, you hit it right on the head... And, what's so .... amazing, I guess... is that it's also what I wonder if she ever thinks... I mean, this could be seen from either side of a broken relationship... This speaks right at the heart... Very moving...

[ang3l2004]

Thanks so much for reading my poem and liking it I appreciate that alot !!!