The Artist Posted January 22, 2005 Share Posted January 22, 2005 There's nothing left to say everything's been done now it's time to end what we have began everything has gone everything has changed this is just not right it will never be the same what we had is no longer here what he had has disapeared what we had, it has all changed now it's over it will never be the same you've spent it all, it's all gone there is no need to carry on I can't do this, it is a lie I can't do this you know I tried we have now come to the end we must never speak again you have no more you can spend and I can no longer pretent and when you lay down to sleep you will never dream of me and when I fade away for good you will have understood that what we had, it was not real what we had was no big deal this is the last thing I will send and this is where it all shall end Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted January 22, 2005 Share Posted January 22, 2005 I liked your poem alot it showed emotion and that is good keep writing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
viola Posted January 22, 2005 Share Posted January 22, 2005 woow that is really beautifull ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shortieGirl220 Posted April 19, 2005 Share Posted April 19, 2005 i really enjoyed the poem, i could really relate.... thanks for sharing it with us.. keep writting always, shortieGirl220 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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