in_the_mirror Posted January 19, 2005 Share Posted January 19, 2005 ok i know this isn't the greatest poem but it just kinda came out, Dear Mr. Right, You've always been around to give me a hug when you needed it. I love you so much I trust you so much You love me too And you distrust me so much. And it's ok, It doesn't matter I just won't do anything unless it's with you. It would fix many problems, and you need not to worry when out with your friends, I'll be safe and sound in bed. And if i do go out, you have every right to be mad, you don't trust me and you have to keep me in line. I understand, i was wrong, please know i love you. Tell me what i can do to make you happy, Because that's all i want in life, to make you happy? Yeah... Ri-ight. yes i was extremely upset when i wrote this, but my heart is breaking and i just feel lost at the moment, i just need someone to tell me it isn't so and that it will be alright. i hear it from my friends everyday, but its what they are suppose to say, and they don't understand, please if you respond to anything other then the poem, please pm me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
melrich Posted January 20, 2005 Share Posted January 20, 2005 Well I hope that poem is not arefelection of how you are feeling. I men essentially this poem is saying I willbe you doormat. If that is the status of your relationship you should just get out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShySoul Posted January 20, 2005 Share Posted January 20, 2005 Ok, I think I get it now. For a second I thought you were saying that you missed him and that you'd do anything to have him back. Then I noticed the "yeah right" at the end. I love sarcasm. As for how you are feeling, things will be ok. I take it that he was jealous, mean, and controlling? You deserve better than that. It may hurt now but in time you'll see that you are better off without him. You are a good person and will find someone that will treat you right. This jerk is the one is is missing out on someone as amazing as you. Cheer up, smile. Things will get better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimbo10 Posted January 20, 2005 Share Posted January 20, 2005 I totally believe that everyone has a mister right. That's great, Night Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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