Emotional Posted January 9, 2005 Share Posted January 9, 2005 I walk down the street and comtiplate I feel nothing but humbleness for you and hate Its not like i remember our first slow dance When i first met you i couldn't believe u gave me a chance The seconde time around was supose to go more smooth The seconde time around was not at all in the groove The third time around was even worse than the seconde time when i wrote about us everything seemed to ryhme they say third times the charm but now i know its all a lie I write these last words while i say Goodbye ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Good bye is a hard thing to say for me ive been putting it on delay Our relationship is like a load of decay Ive been lookin for ways to say goodbye But all i want to say to u is HI Its hard to let things go sometimes, like a toy uve had since childhood like on thanksgiving when u cant get anough of gmas great food The cookin is great but u know its not healthy to overload your plate Your can't seem to look away yet u cant seem to believe its fate a Little like letting go Of love but u dont wanna stop kissing The seconde u stop and look away u think about what u r missing You dont want the good times to pass before your eyes Your afraid of finding our varies of lies Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
boredguy Posted January 9, 2005 Share Posted January 9, 2005 those are really great poems, i feel pain from them though... it seems as though u feel trapped...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emotional Posted January 10, 2005 Author Share Posted January 10, 2005 Trapped ....Yes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delaurence23 Posted January 11, 2005 Share Posted January 11, 2005 "when i wrote about us everything seemed to ryhme" first of all the poem was amazing second of all i know what your talking about isnt it amazing how when you get into a mode your subconsciouss takes off and you dont even have to think it just comes.... i understand where your coming from, if you need me send me a message Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emotional Posted January 12, 2005 Author Share Posted January 12, 2005 Im glad u get the gist of my poem...isn't it ironic? Ill Pm you Most Def~ Thanks for caring Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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