winkybear Posted January 7, 2005 Share Posted January 7, 2005 Im sorry if this is lousy, this is my first time writing one. I hope its ok. Here it goes : Morning shall come again, In the ray of the light I seek shelter, And bask under the warmth of the shine, Hiding away from the thoughts of the devil, Even if it speaks the truth. The candle that sheds light, Shall slowly fade like morning to night, As nothing is neverending, But helpless fools believes in the comfort it brings, As to children believing in old man's lullabies. Am I a helpless fool, Or am I a blind man, Listening to the chirping of the birds, Feeling the flow of the river, When my eyes cry out to see, What is actually a mirage to the senses. Either way I am the same, Just a helpless fool, Just a blind man. [/i] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
in_the_mirror Posted January 8, 2005 Share Posted January 8, 2005 wow that was great, im actually speechless, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winkybear Posted January 8, 2005 Author Share Posted January 8, 2005 thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmptySoul Posted January 11, 2005 Share Posted January 11, 2005 Wow, good job. This is my favorite part candle that sheds light, Shall slowly fade like morning to night, As nothing is neverending, But helpless fools believes in the comfort it brings, Empty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delaurence23 Posted January 11, 2005 Share Posted January 11, 2005 its really good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delaurence23 Posted January 11, 2005 Share Posted January 11, 2005 its really good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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