shorty4ever15 Posted January 1, 2005 Share Posted January 1, 2005 I didn't think I would be making another post in poetry, but here I am again. This one has more meaning. I actually find this one more powerful than my last. Some of you may not understand what I mean, yet others out there may fully get it. Trials and Tribulations The days are long, yet they come and go I made it through, all on my own 2004 is dead, bringing the new year It will most certainly be full of fear I am ended here, bringing forth new life What I mean, I cannot say But today is surely...a new day. Today is gone, tomorrow has come. The battle...has now begun. Please feel free to offer criticism. I won't be offended at all. Again this is basically all spontaneous stuff off the top of my head, so I understand if you don't like it. ~shorty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted January 1, 2005 Share Posted January 1, 2005 I like it. I feel the same way, at the moment. under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shorty4ever15 Posted January 1, 2005 Author Share Posted January 1, 2005 Thanks under. After I wrote it, I kinda thought that no one would like it because it really has some hidden meaning in it that only I thought I would understand. But, I guess not. Anyway thanks for the reply. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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