The Artist Posted December 22, 2004 Share Posted December 22, 2004 How can I stand by ypu after all you've done to me how can I see it through when hurt is all i see well you went on your way set off on your own you no longer need me so I must leave you alone all that we once had has been lost forever you can't have it both ways leave me and lose me altogether you're need for me has ended no there is no point to stay I no longer have a purpose time to just go away I thought you were the one for me but my thoughs have passed me by I thought we'd be one forever but now we say goodbye we have both reached the end we shall never meet again I'll miss you love I'll miss your smile but the time has come to say goodbye Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prosper Posted December 22, 2004 Share Posted December 22, 2004 Hi Pal, nice poem. keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForAnother Posted December 23, 2004 Share Posted December 23, 2004 agreed nice poem. I like the ending of the 2nd stanza and the beginning of the 3rd. ForAnother Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
From_Now_On Posted December 23, 2004 Share Posted December 23, 2004 That's really good. One of my favorites I've read of yours yet. Nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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