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Two New Pieces -Comments/Criticism Always Appreciated-


mymelancholysoul

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The first one a friend of mine is turning into a song. Neither are my best work but they are something I came up with. Enjoy or not, it is all up to you.

 

We're perfect

Can't you see?

Like dolls on a shelf

Made of porcelain;

Painted till perfection

We stand in the shadows

With cherry smiles

And haunting glass eyes

Bothering no one

Collecting the remains

Of your love

Becoming the ones

You have always wanted

So fragile

We are

Too easy to break

You would think more care would be taken

That you would want

To preserve us

But what are we?

Other than what your parents wanted too?

Nothing

But dolls on a shelf

Collecting the remains

Of your love

 

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Were your everything and more

Children of your God

A torn and tattered scar

On the wrist of human life

Just like broken toys

Lost beneath the bed

Faded from all memory

And dust fills our core

Over used and abused

Hated and feared

Because were your baby dolls

Nothing more

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