The Artist Posted December 11, 2004 Share Posted December 11, 2004 you put yourself into your place you make yourself a disgrace you push yourself off the edge so why don't you, get your self back up again you have no one else to blame you hate now your own shame and the only one who can turn this around is you there's nothing that anyone else can do you put yourself into this stae you make yourself your own hate you bring yourself all of this pain so wont you, get your self out of your game only you brought upon this rage and only you can make it go away but you wont you'll mess up again and they will all come back to stay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prosper Posted December 11, 2004 Share Posted December 11, 2004 Hi Pal, Thats a very nice poem! i share the same sentiments for that... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PunkyMonkey Posted December 11, 2004 Share Posted December 11, 2004 I loved that poem, I'm in the same place. I just wish everyone else could know that I feel this way. But anyways I loved you poem it is quite exellent work. Keep posting! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmptySoul Posted December 16, 2004 Share Posted December 16, 2004 Good job. Puts a nice perspective on that subject that we all need to keep in mind. Empty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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