under_the_pressure Posted December 10, 2004 Share Posted December 10, 2004 These are my feelings at the moment. If you'd like to comment go ahead. boyfriend number 2 "you know, between you, andrew and gary lately I don't know who's worse" .click... does she not know i'm home alone? see what I mean then I see her note she left me last night; I love you Precious Angel. You will always be my baby girl. Love-Mom All this starts because I won't call her boyfriend. boyfriend number 2. She won't apologize she'll think I didn't even hear it It's just another gaping wound from her. under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Meow18 Posted December 10, 2004 Share Posted December 10, 2004 Thats a really good poem. It has an interesting style to it, I can't really explain. (Definantly a good thing). I would be really interested in reading more of your poems if you wouldn't mind sharing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mtastic Posted December 11, 2004 Share Posted December 11, 2004 I like it too, it is a neat style. I like the first line, because its a little ambiguous: are you saying it to someone, or is someone saying it to you? Kepp the poems coming, mtastic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted December 11, 2004 Author Share Posted December 11, 2004 I'm glad you two like them...I'm sure I'll keep writing. Mtastic; to answer your question someone is saying it to me. My mother said it to me earlier today. I'm sure you'll see more. Glad you like my style, and my poems. under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mystic angel Posted April 21, 2006 Share Posted April 21, 2006 like your poem it is good keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neva_black_n_white Posted April 21, 2006 Share Posted April 21, 2006 Smiles* youve got a different approach indeed. its like a little diaryness .. everything that needs to be said and is. i like the style..fabulous Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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