ang3l2004 Posted December 3, 2004 Share Posted December 3, 2004 All I see in my mind is you walking away, Now I am stuck thinking about you allday. All I can hear is you tell me you love me, Then turn around and hear this is not where you want to be. I can feel you wrap your arms around me so tight, But from waking up it was another dream in the night. Does your heart still beat for me anymore, I really dont know because you walked out of the door. Do you miss me and think about me at all, Mabe this is what I am wishing because I feel 2 feet tall. You say you need to get over me and move on with you life, Please stop telling me that oneday I will become your wife. Dont be mad at me but I must tell you how I feel, Stop all this madness and just go with what is real. You tell me I am your angel and that I came from up above, stop treating me the way you do and treat me like someone you love. Stop making me cry and hurting me more and more, Treat me with respect because you I do adore. Wipe the tears from my eyes and just be by my side, Stop trying to be so tough because on the inside I have died. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lost_666 Posted December 3, 2004 Share Posted December 3, 2004 wow! this is very good! you obviously are very crafty with your pen and have a lot of potential! keep it up..........take care! xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CarterJonas Posted December 3, 2004 Share Posted December 3, 2004 You have a very good way with poetry and expressing feelings. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
in_the_mirror Posted December 5, 2004 Share Posted December 5, 2004 i really like your poem. keep up the great work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ang3l2004 Posted December 9, 2004 Author Share Posted December 9, 2004 Thanks!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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