troublegal05 Posted November 30, 2004 Share Posted November 30, 2004 hey everyone here are some last minute poems there not my best but I hope you enjoy them....thanx Listen to a song: Listen to a song sung from the highest peak A creature of wisdom breathes a tranquil tune of wisdom calming the rushing winds, saving the leaves from leaving thier nest Listen to the melodious tune, a note to every thought holding lifes message Listen to a song sung to save the doubtful and confussed It sings with nature to give us another beautiful day The carpenter: Black coats an un-farnished life, a blistered block sanded by her friends and family she twiddles a design to match the pattern of her soul She lies away sold to a life of solemness and selfpity. Trapt: Frozen beneath thin ice, pushing my lifes strengths to break the shield which keeps me under; feeling breathless and numb Falling deeper and deeper under the icy water my screams stifle beneath the growing darkness This picture I've painted is stilled and revealed for all to see THe hourglass shattered, the pengilum swinging faster and faster, rippling the darkness incased in my picture, framed by my family and friends. Hanging High from the grounds of reality evade to all who surrounds me This piognant surrealism pushes me back into a shallow clouded pool of anarchy Time chimes its cruelty, a hue of realism strokes its way into my painting showing disdain and confussion leaving me traped behind minds view. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JeanBesn Posted November 30, 2004 Share Posted November 30, 2004 Your poems are good, I loved them! 5- stars Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
troublegal05 Posted December 1, 2004 Author Share Posted December 1, 2004 Thank you JeanBesn for your reply....... 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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