in_the_mirror Posted November 30, 2004 Share Posted November 30, 2004 i took all that i had, more then i did before, jumped in, and loved with all my heart. i knew i would be hurt. i knew i could ruin my life, but i knew my love meant more. it has all gone and left, and i know it is mostly my fault, i knew that i made a mistake in my past. i could trust, i could believe, i could take a running leap of faith, to think that i would be caught, but i was dropped, i knew it would happen. I couldn't let this love eat me away, while i stand quietly and say nothing, just like i always did. i let loose my everything, and showed you how i felt, and for awhile it all was great, but something ate away at you. i can't teach someone something they have never done before, something that can't be taught, the only thing that can't be taught... trust. this is just a rough draft..so sorry if it isn't very good. but i want people's input. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
behind_these_eyes Posted November 30, 2004 Share Posted November 30, 2004 I thought that was amazing. you have real talent, great job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimbo10 Posted November 30, 2004 Share Posted November 30, 2004 i liked that. I'm a musician, and i could hear that being really nice if you get around to finding music, or a writer for it. good luck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PunkyMonkey Posted November 30, 2004 Share Posted November 30, 2004 I thought that was amazing. you have real talent, great job! I agree, It's great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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