wasting_time Posted November 26, 2004 Share Posted November 26, 2004 Hey all i'm justin an im 15. This is a poem i wrote about one of my close friends that is a girl. Enjoy Speechless I am in your presense Your beauty makes me gasp Every word you speak is flawless A love that will last To know your name; to feel your pain Is a burden not To delve into your interior Is nothing to be forgot I wonder if you keep it deep Deep down, longing to share Waiting for that soul to come Only then your lips will dare Forever here, I will be To help you through the times Where your heart has diminished And left you in your mind I pray that angel's, spread their wings Clear your mind of thought. Let your doubts and woes you have Leave you not distraught The cleansing moment will arrive Where the thoughts of the past Will chose the path out, or in A love that will last. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thatguy04 Posted November 26, 2004 Share Posted November 26, 2004 That was a really good poem, did you show it to your good "friend" yet ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wasting_time Posted November 26, 2004 Author Share Posted November 26, 2004 hehe, yea i have, i wrote it for her when she was having some problems with her boyfriend and it cheered her up, so i was heaps happy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thatguy04 Posted November 27, 2004 Share Posted November 27, 2004 Nice, and good job on the part that you were successful, few guys do this, let alone are they successful, again, nice 8) . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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