PammyFoo Posted November 23, 2004 Share Posted November 23, 2004 Just something i wrote in a spare 5 mins at college today as i was early ____________________________________________________-- Floating amongst fog The towers flicker and signal Solemn beacons. Rooted to the Earth's silent vigil The dead, white sea drown, drown, drowns As the wings of hope. Fall down, down, down. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmptySoul Posted November 24, 2004 Share Posted November 24, 2004 I like it, especially the 2nd stanza. Empty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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