Heart and Soul

[thatguy04]

This is a poem I just made recently. It may seem a bit morbid for some, but I hope you still enjoy:

 

Heart and Soul

 

My soul yearns to be free

With its curious nature constantly restrained

To never let loose and be free

Because of a those vile three

 

My heart falls and breaks intwine

As it hits the bottom of the endless pit

Of the sorrow and torment of which is mine

Due to those vile three

 

A Mother who can never be a true mother

A Father who lacks courage to face his family

And a Sister who has no care for her brother

 

But I am no better than these three

As I too am as vile as they

For I may have a flaw in me

As I let my heart and soul rot away

 

Any comments would be welcome, and if you were wondering, I almost snapped one day (gasp) and wrote this poem down somehow instead of breaking out.

[Adzy]

Its good...very good. You have obviously have quite an extensive vocabulary, which you could put to good use. Write some more.

 

Even though im only 13, I've wrote a few myself (some because of depression, some for a girl, lol). Herez one of mine:

 

I see da beauty in your eyez,

I c your mind with some surprise,

It seems as life is a test,

What will I do to get the best?

How are you won over by,

Or is friendship our only tie,

You might not luv me, but I love you,

And I always thought we could be two,

But I see you are not in my reach,

For thedesire that I preach,

So now I should stop and b so smart,

For I canonly get a broken heart.

[thatguy04]

Cool (and catchy). Post more of your poems, there nice too. Oh, and I made a mistake on one line, oops (*Because of those vile three). And if you want to read more, I have posted others on this site, so look me up .