heart Posted November 17, 2004 Share Posted November 17, 2004 hey all, let me know what you think,, this may seem to be a dark poem,, but it was written a long time ago,, and it is honest,, thanks for reading u]Of No Great Concern[/u] In solitude I am what I wish to be In company I am what others label me In solitude I have dreams that keep my soul breathing In company my soul suffocates In solitude I am looked at with curious eyes In company I am forgotten about In solitude I am profound in purpose In company my purpose fades I am of no great concern Like glass, I am looked through, as if I have no substance In search of meaning, in a world where none exists. Life is of no great concern to me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thatguy04 Posted November 17, 2004 Share Posted November 17, 2004 Hey that was really good, and it didnt seem too dark. I felt the emotion that I'm sure was put into it also. Good job, and if you have any more, I'll be sure to read them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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