Teen Angel Posted May 13, 2003 Share Posted May 13, 2003 A coyote taking you away for a lesson Maroon, sending soft waves of secrecy to you 21, going out to hve my first drink Wyoming, a country place for farms Confident to give feeling to those who are scared Onion-rings, the food in which gives you happiness; pleasure Halloween giving way for the paranormal to enter our world Playing the piano for millions of fans A rose to prick your finger of which you touch 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SwingFox Posted May 14, 2003 Share Posted May 14, 2003 Good work again, Teen Angel ... great poem, although "21, going out to have my first drink" sounds a little weird to me. Hard to believe, even though your nick does say Angel. It could be possible, though Hopefully you'll find some time to answer the question: what's the bottom line and how did you feel when you wrote this poem? Happy? Sad? Confused? I am putting some money on 'confused' Keep posting ~ SwingFox ~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teen Angel Posted May 14, 2003 Author Share Posted May 14, 2003 I was happy to be all those things inside my spiritual self. Not confused. Sorry to break your heart, SwingFox. Lol... The bottom line is kind of like Britney Spears' words. I'm still growing up. Not a girl not yet a woman. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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